My Ideal Partner (assigment 3)
MY IDEAL PARTNER
What Kind Of Partner Do I Want
what kind of partner do I want right? So, the first thing I want is to understand each other or not be selfish, why? because in my opinion when we run a relationship, what we are looking for is not only beautiful, or handsome, but that is the comfort of our relationship. It's useless if one of us is selfish and wants to win on his or her own, it will only result in discomfort in relationship and usually the relationship does not last long. Second, that is having the same religion or having the same belief. Because in my religion, we must be married, and have the same beliefs. The third, namely that she is a woman who has good attittude and nature, why do I choose something like that? because later if we get married and we are given a child by God, we must be a good example for our children. The last one is, the most important of all is that is, we are blessed by our parents, because it is the prayers and blessings of parents that can make our relationship always good and in God's protection. I hope to get a woman in accordance with my criteria
I’m sorry if so many mistake on my grammar, so don't forget to comment ya guyss
thank you for your attention;)
Hi Ojan I don't find any serious grammar mistake here. You just need to practice more on writing. That's a good article, I think but you need to improve that. Keep spirit jann!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the criticism and suggestions, it will be very useful for me
DeleteYesss same w/ lula u just need to practice more on writing jan bcs after dots (.) u have use capital alphabet first on ur word 😉 keep spirit ojann!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the criticism and suggestions, it will be very useful for me👍👍
Deleteyou've a good criteria and hope you can find her sometime....
ReplyDeleteI have same opinion with other jan and you have to use capital letter for " i " in your last sentence.
Thank you for the criticism and suggestions, it will be very useful for me👍👍
DeleteYour criteria are very nice jann.. I hope you can find someone like that😊
ReplyDeleteBut there are some wrong writing method
Thank you for the criticism and suggestions, it will be very useful for me👍👍
DeleteWaw this articel very interesting, i imagine that when i read this post. That's great criteria, and i think you are a great writer too, but you must be carefull and particular. GOOD JOB Ojan!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you windaa👍
DeleteNice ojan
ReplyDeleteBut the opening you say “this is a my third assignment” it’s actually written without “a”
Thank you stevee👍👍
DeleteAwesome, Fauzan.
ReplyDeleteBut I suggest to you to write the outline of your story... 😆😆😆
Thank you for the criticism and suggestions, it will be very useful for me👍👍
DeleteYour ideal patner is a very kind person
ReplyDeleteHope you find her
Really good criteria Ozan, hopefully you will find someone based on your criteria 😎
ReplyDeleteI thought you have to correction it. Because, I find some mistakes, like you forget to use capital letter in the beginning of a paragraph. Oh ya, I just remind you to change your language settings from Indonesia to English. But overall it's good.
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