My Favorite Teacher
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In this section I want to talk about My Favorite Teacher.
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#When and where did I meet this teacher?
I met him when i was in 3th grade in senior high school or grade 12. At that time we were all in class and started a new semester, actually I already knew him because he was my tutor when I was in 11th grade. The teacher named is Mr. Kandi Fauzi
#Who is the teacher and the subject he teaches?
His name is Mr. Kandi Fauzi, but we are all used to calling him Mr. Kandi, and also he is a 12th grade math teacher. He is one of the senior teachers in my school.
#Why is the teacher's lesson special and explains how this teacher influenced you?
Since I first met, I have felt something different between him and other teacher teachers. The way he taught was very relaxed and exciting, and he was always patient with naughty students, I've also never seen him scold students. He always gives advice to all of us and sometimes tells us about his valuable life experiences that can make us always motivated and always spirited. He always gets the most favorite teacher title in my school.
Okay, friends, maybe that's all I can say on this blog, sorry if there are many mistakes. I hope you want to give your comments, Thank you :)
In this section I want to talk about My Favorite Teacher.
I hope you can enjoy my blog
#When and where did I meet this teacher?
I met him when i was in 3th grade in senior high school or grade 12. At that time we were all in class and started a new semester, actually I already knew him because he was my tutor when I was in 11th grade. The teacher named is Mr. Kandi Fauzi
#Who is the teacher and the subject he teaches?
His name is Mr. Kandi Fauzi, but we are all used to calling him Mr. Kandi, and also he is a 12th grade math teacher. He is one of the senior teachers in my school.
#Why is the teacher's lesson special and explains how this teacher influenced you?
Since I first met, I have felt something different between him and other teacher teachers. The way he taught was very relaxed and exciting, and he was always patient with naughty students, I've also never seen him scold students. He always gives advice to all of us and sometimes tells us about his valuable life experiences that can make us always motivated and always spirited. He always gets the most favorite teacher title in my school.
Okay, friends, maybe that's all I can say on this blog, sorry if there are many mistakes. I hope you want to give your comments, Thank you :)
Great, Fauzan!
ReplyDeleteBut I still don’t get the meaning of the first sentence “I met him when he was in ...” is he your senior or you met him when you were on 3rd grade?
sorry the sentence should be like this "I met him when i was in 3th grade in senior high school or grade 12" thanks for the criticism and suggestions, it was very useful for me
DeleteThat's good article Fauzan, good job 👍
ReplyDeleteThank you👍
DeleteGod job ojan
ReplyDeleteBe careful about tenses
thank you for the criticism and suggestions, it is very useful for me
DeleteHi Ojan, nice to read your article here. On sentence "I have felt something different " you maybe just write "I felt something different.". Keep spirit!
ReplyDeletethank you for the criticism and suggestions, it is very useful for me
Delete"The teacher was named Mr. Kandi Fauzi" I think it's better if you delete the "was" because your teacher's name still Mr. Kandi Fauzi, right? I really enjoy your writing anyway... Sepirit Ojann
ReplyDeletethank you for the criticism and suggestions, it is very useful for me
DeleteI love to read your blog because it has good and simple structure to be read. Great
ReplyDeleteThank youu ning👍
DeletegreAT JOB JAN... but I think you just typo when you write "and other teacher teachers" it's should just "teachers "
ReplyDeleteI imagined that u are the one of naughty student there hahah 😂 kidding jan, for mr the "Since I first met, I have felt something different... " would be better if its written in "Since I first met him, I have felt something different"
ReplyDeletegood job ojan! you're already do your best but i think u should change "always motivated and always spirited" become "always excited"
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